Wednesday, June 23, 2010

"..Strange girl.."

A giggly view but something new;
Saw her smiling and may be blushing;

Was glad to see the cresent moon on her face;
May be she has got her own delightful grace;

Still she walks alone in the rain;
she cries but she never shows her pain;

Her eye twinkles like the stars;
Could easily see those scars;

She laid down on the green grass;
stretched her arms and  let the emotcions to pass;

A soul so weary weeps in dark;
Dreams again lost their spark..

She is together in lonliness;
and alone in togetherness..

P.S. sorry!! my modem was in Koma v.v Finally School reopened.. busy with studies and stuffs! I am a senior now! o.o but still me and my friends still acts like dumb XD I have to wake up at 4:50 am everyday for tutions! dead tired right now.. sorry would be away from blogland!! >_<
 Kritika's cousin killed Kritika's dad!! T_T Can't believe that people could be so mean..  27th june is kritika's birthday =? She was my best friends once but now we are not even friends but yeah i can't see her like this..

9 comments:

ambiguous_angel said...

that's beautiful:)

good luck with waking up that early..aja!

DuDo said...

Emo emo nice poem on the lonely gal.
Btw feel sorry abt ur frnd who lost her dad. Ppl are selfish... i had friend who was murdered by his other clse frns. They knw each other since childhood. Its jus human mind cant predict whats next and what lures you to do all this bizarre acts. :(

Giv her full support from your side she definitely needs it nw.. go talk 2 her even if u are nt friends rgt nw

Nipun said...

Lovely poem Choco..
Touched...:)
How do u write so well at this age??

Just awesome..

Is the P.s part for real?
I m afraid its true..:(
May God Guide us..

Nuts

Chocolatelover said...

Awwww..... i always love the picturs, they are just too cute all the time, and your [poem, it;s very very sweet. :)
Have fun in school. :)

An Ordinary Gal said...

beautiful dear...

All The Best for studies :)

Sankoobaba said...

fuck these ppl who kill...

nice poem tho

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

aww..nice rhymes and all~ :D

btw..dont worry..youre not alone..im busy with school stuffs as well :P taahahaa~ :D

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tristarfivestar said...

Cool nice poem. Hope to read your blog soon!
Ugh whats with this world and killing????

anupama said...

Dear Choco Baby,
Good Evening!
First be with Kritika;give her moral support!THAT IS HUMANITY!
It's really sad that the love support and shade are snatched away from kritika's life!Make her feel your presence!It makes a lot of difference to her right now!
Your lines are touching!
Wishing you a friendly and relaxing Sunday,
Sasneham,
Anu