Tuesday, June 8, 2010

"..alone again.."

Dreams got ruined and
Hopes of being together
 shattered forever?

I stared the bright
white moon last night
and got misty eyes
full of lies..

Ache in my heart
yells why are we apart?
I cried a silent tear
with a fear of loosing you..

Dew drops on the leaves
giggled silently..
It reminded me of your eye
which made me to die..

Then a thought popped
in my mind..
Will you cry if I die?
I looked up at sky
and had a deep sigh..

My tears just don't stop
I want to be with you..
I promise not to
abandon this hope..

I tried to hide myself,
from the the eyes of the world..
I stood behind the pole,
and cried a silent tear..

The stars and the moon
are just so alone;
yeah.. as alone as me..
I wish if they were near;
I wish if you were here..


Being Pramoda... said...

Hi gal.. thats soo nice...:) keep rocking..:) beautiful expression and i enjoyed it completelyyyy

sulagna ™ said...

hidding behind your happy face and crying..how i can associate with this one :)

An Ordinary Gal said...

ohh loved last two lines so very much choco...Keep Writing beautiful rhymes :)

Jingle said...

you always write beautiful stuff,
moving and vivid...
cool poem!

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Why hide? What is one this person's mind. Why does she want to hide even when she cries. Does she fear that the world will see if not the one for whom the tear is shed? I like the fear aspect of the poem.

Cheryl: Oh to Be a Muse said...

very nice dear. your other poem says you won't be online for 10 months! does that include blogspot? :/


♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ prams di
thanx di :)

@ sulagna di
haha i dont have any idea! o.o

@ Riya
hehe thanks :)

@ Vittaldas
hmmm.. she is crying for someone ans she is hiding her tears from the world

@ Cheryl
heya.. yup may be it includes blogspot too.. I am not sure =/

kixon said...

this poem got me right here (puts hand on heart) keep up the great work and i hope you feel better

kixon said...

i love your work this poem got me right here (points to heart) keep up the great work and i hope you fell better soon

kixon said...

love your work hope you will feel better soon