Friday, June 11, 2010

"..stay alone?.."

Dreams and illusions;
darkness and silence..
doesn't need any companions;
they hurt her more
than the lonliness..

Her misty eyes and
crescent smile faints;
When the stars giggles and
the pink breeze cuddles her in pain..

Why tears doesn't stop?
Why happy movement doesn't stay?
She cried alot to lesser her pain;
Just want to yell out her feelings again..

She wanna tell them
"stop being mean to her!"
-they've never seen her love and care;
but just for her one mistake
they've become so unfare..

Ever thought of her fragile
and naive heart?
Ever heard to the faint echoes
that says don't wanna stay apart?

May be not and that's why
they're gonna leave her alone;
Yes she's scared..
but she doesn't wanna tell them that!

They haven't listened
to her mumbling voice;
and haven't seen her
glittering eyes..
Yes it was the time
when she was crying..

But they never noticed
Oh Jesus, what a fate..!
Now it's too late;
She's not gonna turn back..

She never cared to check her bruises
those blood stains were visible,
but she never noticed...
They are the one who has
who ruled her heart
and torn it in two parts..


Jingle said...

another beautiful poem!
cute you.

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

another sad and emotional poem^^ nice! i am running out of superlatives just to describe this ..

An Ordinary Gal said...

it was again beautifully written by you :)

Chocolatelover said...

Awesome and beautiful poem, expresses the pain in a wonderful way, keep it up. :)

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

When our own people hurt us the pain is unbearable. Nicely written.

Sunakshi said...

wow you've switched to long poems..keep it up mahn! ;)

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Jingle
thanks ^_____^

@ Ayu
lol its okay xD and thanks!

@ Riya
thank you ^____^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ chocolate lover
thanx x))

@ Vittaldas
yup T___T

@ Sunakshi di
its getting so random!! xD sometime i confuse myself with it :P