Thursday, July 1, 2010

Where do I stand?

In the world of disguise,
I stay in a nightmare so worse;
All the lies in my eyes,
Stares at the darkness and lonliness,
Living a life of misery,
Walking alone in a crowd of thousands;
Embrace alone the bitter silence,
With companions but still so alone;
Death whispered in my ears,
Couldn't hold up so,
I yelled at my fears,
I am lost in my own little world;
Silence is no worse than words;
Fake smile sighs somewhere,
Tears roll down and dies there;
A question still bothers me in despair,
So many to hold my hand,
but seriously..
Where do I stand?

P.S. a bit sad.. but idk why? -.-" Laughed really hard at school xD Prince got his hand fractured again I guess! -.-" dumbo!! <.< blaaah.. I was chasing him but he just slipped when he was running!! I din't even touch him!!
P.P.S Why do we all become so mean sometimes? =? anyways I'll try to check your blogs soon! :) *hugs tight*



Stand by yourself and fate... i don't know how you will do that but it's the answer in this.... may you feel better and peaceful than the last!!!:D

God Bless!!!:)


tristarfivestar said...

HIII again!!!! nice poem but why a bit down???
its ok to be sad once a while.. would love to read a happy poem from you :)

tristarfivestar said...

any way nice poem... but i love the back ground music for some reason!!!

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said... one can beat you up in this genre of poems.!! you expressed it so powerful!!im moved!:D

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said... one can beat you up in this genre of poems.!! you expressed it so powerful!!im moved!:D

Sunakshi said...

I am sorry for being so irregular in commenting :(

I loved the emotions :) Keep it up *winks*

Nipun said...


That poem itself tells ur sadness..

U are just awesome choco and remember this each time u r in trouble..

Dont be sad..

And yes, that wasnt ur mistake at all//
It has happened with me many times. If a cup breaks in kitchen and i m in my room, i have to take the responsibility coz everyone says that its all becoz of u.

So chill girl..



nitwit said...

lovely poem kid .. just going through the lines can tell that it is typical shri trade mark poem.. sweet emotional and touchy

Jay said...

as usual lovely....though u seemed a bit gloomy.....

Cheryl: Oh to Be a Muse said...

i don't know why we all become so mean at times, but i do know that we never realize it until after the fact. something we should work on.

nice poem! hope you're not feeling too sad. :)

Anonymous said...

Oh!nice poem........
Very well crafted,.....

But y r u making us sad always...?//
i FEEL very desperate.....

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Kelvin
awww kelvin

thank you sho much ^^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Raed
heyaaa :3

just swinging mood.. dont worry ^^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Ayu

awww thank you ayu ^^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Sunakshi di
hey you dont have to be sorry ^^
*winks* XD

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Nipun
aww thank you ^^

haha! you made me laugh lol xD

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Garima
awwww thank you sho much ^^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Jay
yeah I was when I wrote that! =)
and thank you ^^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Cheryl
thank you ^^

yeah I am fine now :3

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Neeya

I dont want to make anyone sad <.<
My feelings rhymes nothing else ^^