Monday, July 26, 2010

"..A sad sight.."

Stars lean down to,
kiss away her tears;
and She kissed the sky,
to blow away her fears..

The cresent moon is,
shining down on her face.
The saddest sight is,
pleasing in different ways;

Death sucked all the,
pains and torments that,
She has been bearing for ages;
Finally she can find

The breeze sang a song,
to make her fall asleep;
The last long sleep one can,
ever have and yes,
She will never wake up again;

Even love cried when she died,
Fireflies illuminated the view;
dew drops are so sad,
dried leaves made her death bed..


Sunakshi said...

Its beautiful..keep it up girl..

Mademoiselle Deva said...

even love cried when she died... quite sad.

ambiguous_angel said...

aw. beautiful.
i wonder where your thoughts are coming from...cause you always amaze me with your poems.

Anonymous said...

Thats so sad ! :( But you beautiful portray makes us more emphatetic .. Indeed very sad sight , which we never wish to see :(

♫♪♥Lonely Dreamer♥♪♫ said...

Lovely one :)
You love Owl City, right? ;p
How have you been?

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said... really moved by this poem ^^


...sad and gloomy yet very lovely and enchanting my friend... i fully understand your case 'bout bein' busy of school stuffs... co'z we're just the same.. i'm aswell busy finishing our Feasibility study... so for both of us... Good luck and cheers!!!:)


Nipun said...





DuDo said...

U knw wht i read 2 poems on fireflies dis morning!!!! :)
i guess all r obsessed wid owlcity!!! lol

n haan dudo about me page has been updated :)

Shas said...

You made death appear so soothing and peaceful.

Cheryl: Oh to Be a Muse said...

this is a well-written poem and very touching. but i do hope you are doing better dear! :)

Selenium said...


I have only three words to say about this...

That was awesome...