Saturday, July 24, 2010

Has been embracing lonliness,
And darkness for decades;
Finally She got to stay,
in a better place;

Enslaved in this haunted place,
she never felt home but,
She has always wished to dance,
With his prince charm
beneath a twinkling dome..

Tears don't lie but,
they haven't noticed it ever,
A pleasing company made her giggle,
But the sad part is, it didn't last forever!

Tired of staying quiet and bear
all torments;
Those smiling masks had
never noticed her bruises..


Rajlakshmi said...

very touching... it really hurts when the tears remain hidden from everyone else

DuDo said...

my personal advice the emotions should flow.... I loved the poem!!! great going :)


Indeed, very touching Shriti... i wonder why a brilliant poem like this doesn't have any title at all??? Hmmmn??? hope all getting better in your world.. take care!!!:)

A Blessed Sunday!!!:)


Nipun said...

Why do u become sad choco?
Keep smiling and everything wil be fine..
And one more thing, Never hide ur tears..

Cry atleast when u r alone but not in front of somebody.


Selenium said...

I couldn't help but notice that you used the illusion/dream world scene from the Clannad Anime...

And the poem suits it too...