Saturday, July 24, 2010


Has been embracing lonliness,
And darkness for decades;
Finally She got to stay,
in a better place;

Enslaved in this haunted place,
she never felt home but,
She has always wished to dance,
With his prince charm
beneath a twinkling dome..

Tears don't lie but,
they haven't noticed it ever,
A pleasing company made her giggle,
But the sad part is, it didn't last forever!

Tired of staying quiet and bear
all torments;
Those smiling masks had
never noticed her bruises..

5 comments:

Rajlakshmi said...

very touching... it really hurts when the tears remain hidden from everyone else

DuDo said...

my personal advice the emotions should flow.... I loved the poem!!! great going :)

WINDOWLAD said...

Indeed, very touching Shriti... i wonder why a brilliant poem like this doesn't have any title at all??? Hmmmn??? hope all getting better in your world.. take care!!!:)

A Blessed Sunday!!!:)

>kelvin

Nipun said...

Why do u become sad choco?
Keep smiling and everything wil be fine..
And one more thing, Never hide ur tears..

Cry atleast when u r alone but not in front of somebody.

Nuts

Selenium said...

I couldn't help but notice that you used the illusion/dream world scene from the Clannad Anime...

And the poem suits it too...

O_O