Tuesday, July 13, 2010

"..bitter reality.."

Sour dreams and bitter reality,
Why death seems better than humanity?
Darkness in eyes utters several lies
But someone murdered my soul and
Left it alone to weep..

Pardon me please if I had done,
Something wrong..
Begging you to walk along,
I stare into the deep sea to find,
someone who belongs to me.

I am missing my friend who
died long back.
I have mom and dad and a couple of
mates but for a friend like her;
my heart really aches..

I need her badly, Oh please Mr. Sky,
 can you tell this to my friend?
I am all alone in this bitter sweet life.
Is she with you; Can you tell me how's she?

Is she happy in the heaven?
Can I talk to her just once or atleast,
Can I see her somehow?
It's been quite long and
I am sick of crying now..

Oh Mr. Sky can you take me to her?
I am missing her hugs and the way she
used to care.
My only friend with who I used to share..
I cry every night when I see the stars so bright;

I make excuses when someone finds me.
Oh I am really very sorry Mr. Sky,
I really didn't mean to make you cry;
Is it just that You are raining or
Is there something in your eye?


Sumit Sarkar said...

You penned down your thoughts very well...
I am sorry for the loss...

♪ Tharangni ♪ said...

its such a beautifull poem! and really sorry for ur fiend!

Gauri Mathur said...


How are you?

DuDo said...

:'( (sob sob) i knw hw it feels when you loose your close 1. n moreover a good friend... :( its great that you hav expressed ur feelings for her. m sure she is happy up there... u must move on the life.. will teach u so many lessons... this is all a part of it. Tc... she would be your guiding star...


Shriti, i am so sorry for that... i feel you in evry words my friend... your sincerity... and caring... all goes out very very well and touched my soul deeply... i am sorry for not always visiting your space nowadays... i'm prioritizing my feasibility study since it's a requirement for my upcoming graduation... hope u understand... appreciate all what you write here and at mine... i'm still coming here but not often.. i promise to catch up when all is done and going out well... thanks for ur kindness!!!:)

Take care!!!:)


Madhu said...

This is about that bestie of urs ryt?


Anonymous said...

That was so very touching poem , the best of your probably and for that 'best ' one who is so very special to you ..Gal , I may just be a 3rd person , but I am sure , your friend , who is with you , every moment , is surely not happy to see you crying for her , hai na ? She is with you always , in you , in your memories :)

Koo said...

This sounded autobiographic? :(
Hang in there, you'll get through.. it'll be fine..

Anonymous said...

Feel very sad
Wishing All the Best 2 ur frnd...

ambiguous_angel said...

that is really one beautiful poem.
I can feel the sadness in it, but its really well written.

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

wow..very nostalgic..i can relate somehow though i haven't experienced having a lose friend who died..


vivek said...

Hi ,

Very expressive , a masterpiece from you and your love for your friend is 4ever ..which remains till lifetime such is the magic of friendship , your friend soul ..will be @ peace , she left beautiful memories deep into your heart to tell you she loves you very much ..God give her lots of happiness wherever she is..

Never be down as the memories do make feel a bit in slow state but we must look up and view though the frnds eyes she won't like you crying ..she wants you remember her and be in Happy state always ..so the connect ..keep strong ..

take care .
N keep smiling ..