Sunday, August 29, 2010

"..my destiny.."

When tired eyes look up at the sky,
they smile slightly and shed tears of joy,
As many times as they blink they sigh,
they think of you and wish to fly..

'cause my dreams now seem blue,
I whisper your name quietly and feel you,
the darkness fill my heart with fear,
and I just wish you were here..

A secret aspiration of my cursed soul,
might come true but not the whole,
I swear, you are my very melody,
all I need you is to be my destiny..

24 comments:

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

beautiful..:) and the picture is from 5 cm/sec i so love it~ :D

Sjmach said...

A destiny that seems long awaited,
A truth that needs to be met;
Who knows what time might bring forth,
Let's just wait with hope instead.

Nice, love each and every one of your poems. Thanks again for writing it on your blog.

Anurag said...

Hey,nice work.
.
I think you are now 16+ .... Aren't you.?

nitwit said...

lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Jingle said...

lovely writing,
Glad to see you in my blog.

Madhu said...

awesome girl..:) so sweetly narrated!

Anurag said...

hiii....
you have been tagged. see my blog. :)

CutePriya said...

this is an aaawwwwww poem...BEAUTIFUL

Selenium said...

:O

The pic for 5 cms per second fits the poem so damn perfectly... just like nuts and bolts in a Ferrari :D

Yes. Some of the best poems out there are written when one feels alone and away from their loved ones... :|

Randeep said...

nice one dear

cheers
Randeep

♫♪♥Lonely Dreamer♥♪♫ said...

Loved it :)
The picture's good too !!

NEEYA ............ said...

Awesome Choco...awesome...
I'm a fan of you...:)

☆rabbito-bonbon☆ said...

Keep up the good work girl! ♥ (^-^)b

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Ayu
thanks :D

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Sandeep
hehe thank you ^_^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Anurag
thanks and nope m still 16 :o

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Garima
thank youuuu :)

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Jingle
thanks :D

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Madhu
hehehehe.. thank you madhu ^-^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Cute priya
thank uuuuuu :D

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Randeep
thank you ^^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Juhi
thank u Juhi ^^
glad to see u here again ^^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Neeya
awwwwwe neeya thank you so much ^^

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

@ Rabito
thanks rabito..
glad to see you here ^_^