Wednesday, April 7, 2010

...my identity

Who I am?
Why I am?
I wear a fake smile,
I wear a broken heart;
My life belongs to them.
And my tears,
My tears belongs to me.
My dreams are shattered.
My dead soul weeps,
Broken heart decieves,
I can't fall asleep 'cause,
Sweet silence still screams;
Have I lost my identity?
Or I never had any?

20 comments:

Niraj said...

This is what each of us think one or other instance in our life. So True.

Regards
Niraj
Masallalemonade.blogspot.com

bibhash jha said...

dont fake a smile .. i want a reall smile .. trust me world is far better than it seems and the creator of the world is YOU .. make it the way you want it .. with your very own prized items ..ur chosen colors ..and yes Identity ..You already have one .

Well read this ..
http://bibhashkjha.blogspot.com/2010/04/tranquility.html

Leona said...

That's sad.
I bet a lot of people can relate.

Sankoobaba said...

"or I never had any"
perfect ! very good poem..

gets the msg across in minimum words
..
keep it up!

Koo said...

We all face such thoughts in our lives.. It's sad, really..

sulagna ™ said...

confusion is a mark of youth..it will get sorted out eventually..where have you been lil girl..not coming over to my page for a long time now :(

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Amazing! This poem is so close to what I wrote in my recent story. Nice poem with great impact and message.

P.S.: Haven't seen you at my blog lately. Busy?

vidya said...

sad one but very nicely written!

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

the last two lines are really awesome~!!! :D i missed your sad poem~!!! :D

P.S.
check out my latest post if you're ain't busy~ :3

Divya said...

I hope u r rite.....

but yes, u r so true... many a times i felt the same... n even now sumtimes i feel that!

Madhu said...

Long time?? well yeah makes me sit up and thnk...at times!

Leona said...

RE: I'm great; thanks for asking. How are you?

Sorcerer said...

Its just a feeling of insecurity..
Dont worry! it will go off!
:)
beautifully handled

nitwit said...

this is apparently the phase of life which comes once in everybody's life trust me every bodyyyyyyyyyy. nice post frend enjoyed a lot

karan a said...

How was your exams?

@post... exams havent ruined your talent! :D It is amazing!

suruchi said...

Choco...we all have our identities intact within our fabric...kinda like showered on us when we got our bodies!

We lose it in the haze of self doubt!
I hope it never leaves your side and stays sparkling and impactful always:-)
I wish you’d always smile:-)

ajay said...

You are only 16 and you write such amazing poems! This poem is really deep and touching. Very nice. Keep writing. Best wishes and chocos for you. :)

ABHISHEK SiM said...

"or never had any"

no that can't be. everyone has one. perhaps broken. bruised. and weeping. but everyone has one.

on a personal note, what happened?

Chocolate Lover said...

@ niraj
thanx :)

@ Bibhash
sometimes we can't do what we want T.T

@ Leona
thanx leona

@ Sankoo baba
thanks xD

@ Koo
true :)

@ Sulagna di
sorry... :(
I was busy with exams :)

@ Vittaldas
Thanx and sorry :(
I was busy with exams but now I'll be regular :)

@ Vidya
thanx :)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Ayu
thanx Ayu...and I missed your blog x)

@ Divya
thanx x)

@ Madhu
sorry busy with the exams :)

@ Leona
good to know that..I am good as well :)

@ Sorcy
thanx sorcy :)

@ Nitwit
thanx :)

@ Suruchi
aww..thankiyu xD

@ Karan
haha! it was good though I screwed up my maths exam xD

@ Ajay
haha! thanks x)
keep visiting

@ Abhishek
mmm...it happens so doesn't matter x)
its okay! I'll be fine x)