Sunday, April 11, 2010

Me and her soul..


I dont trust anyone anymore.
I wish If I was dead
Instead of my comrade;
Few enchanting memories;
And my glittering eyes.
My tears now can
say no lies.
Melting eve in silence;
Alone in togetherness,
Or together in lonliness?
Me and her soul;
Something unspoken ,
heard my heart so broken.
Regrets and guilts,
appologies and confessions,
I wish if these could be done,
I would see no nightmares
in my sleep..

P.S. wrote for harpreet T.T
P.P.S I guess m facing writer's block or something X(

15 comments:

Leona said...

Sad poem.
RE: No, I didn't know that. Why do they call you fish?

nitwit said...

really admirable post, awesome.

karan a said...

You have expressed the pain one soul has for other very well... as always, good work.

karan a said...

You have expressed the pain one soul has for other very well... as always, good work.

Divya said...

Good poem... i liked it :)

Sankoobaba said...

very delicate poetry...
and I don't think its writers block..
its more like wave of emotions...represented in words..

funkyrave said...

Okay had been away..
and really missed reading blogs.. which includes urs..
as usual u have great panache in poetry..
really awesome..
Keep posting
Cheerio :)

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Oh! I can understand how sad you feel for this young man who has left us all. But life is mean and sometimes we are faced with tough situations. It is good to remember them, but we must also move on. Easier said than done, but it needs to be done nevertheless.

And, you haven't hit a writer's block. You only have hit a roadblock and you are stuck. See around, you will definitely find a detour.

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

i can feel the depths of this poem..so hurtful and sad..:/

Randeep said...

:( but nicely written .

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Leona
hehe! they pull my leg :P

@ nitwit
thanks :)

@ Karan
yea..me and her :(

@ Divya
thankiyu :)

@ Sankoobaba
thankiyu! :)

@ Raveblast
thankiyu! :)

@ Vittaldas
Harpreet was a girl -.-

@ Ayu
thankiyu T.T

@ Randeep
thanks :)

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Sorry! My apologies. May her soul rest in peace.

ABHISHEK SiM said...

i am sorry.

this is acute. and incurable. no words can't fill the void. i am sorry.

"appologies and confessions,
I wish if these could be done" i am sure they can be done. and i know our mature choco gal knows what i mean.

loads of love,
tc.

Chocolate Lover said...

@ Vittaldas
its okay :)

@ Abhishek
thankiyu! :)

vidya said...

sad poem..you expressed your heart out..May her soul rest in peace!