Monday, April 19, 2010

..I am not happy!..

My eyes spoke the truth,
but they never understood...

I feel so alone,
I feel so lame,
I wish you were here
and this was just a game.

Oh..my fairytale..
why ain't you made it just so well?
I fake a smile and decieve them,
Yes I'm not happy that's what I wanna tell them!

P.S. sorry I don't know what the hell I wrote?
PPS. Right now I'm so angry at someone >.<
PPPS. don't worry I'll be fine!! :)

22 comments:

MinnieRunner said...

Hope you are really fine. We all normally wore fake smiles, and only true friends can read the eyes what the lips cannot tell..

Chhaya said...

Wish u all the best!

Keep smiling :)

sulagna ™ said...

heyii shri..all oki na sweety??

and ohhhh wow we r on fb NOW :) YEAYIIIIII

An Ordinary Gal said...

"I feel so alone,
I feel so lame,
I wish you were here
and this was just a game."


Lovely lines..Hope u will be fine soon :)

An Ordinary Gal said...

"I feel so alone,
I feel so lame,
I wish you were here
and this was just a game."


Lovely lines..Hope u will be fine soon :)

Madhu said...

What happened munchkin ? All fine?

suruchi said...

hey...okay...since u insist...we hope u'd be fine..
but vent out that anger instead of letting it burn u from within:-)

bibhash k jha said...

Don't you worry about the distance
I'm right there if you get lonely
Give this song another listen
Close your eyes
Listen to my voice, it's my disguise
I'm by your side

anyway kid .. nicely written .

tristarfivestar said...

well the lines dont have proper meanings! BUT THEY SAY ALOT!
its a great way to take out your frustration and anger by writing poems

HaRy!! said...

hmmm the dark and emotions... none can portray better than yu!

wisewit said...

Oh, I'm not too worried about you this time. :) Just remember we're here for you if you need anything.

wisewit

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

well i love your melancholic poem as always :P

(ps. check out my latest post if you have time,,.thanks :3)

Sankoobaba said...

angry kya?

good u wrote this..if it helps to get over the gussa!!

good poem.!

Cheryl Clarke said...

Feel better soon! :)

cherylclarke.blogspot.com

tristarfivestar said...

whats wrong be happy some times!!!!!!

Nipun said...

Hey choco!!
Lemme send some chocolates for ya.
Happy na..

Cheers

Nuts

ambiguous_angel said...

that's sad:(

i know that you write what you feel so i hope everything will be okay:)

Chocolate Lover said...

@ minnie runner
yea.. true x)

@ chhaya
thanks!

@ Sulagna
yea..di everything is fine :)
haha! yay! I am happy to find you there :D but fb is a scary place!

@ Riya
thanks! xD

@ Madhu
Ohhhh..I am just angry at someone and I dont wanna let him realize tthat!

@ Suruchi
okay :)

@ bibhash
haha! thanks! xD

@ Tristarfivestar
thanks! xD

@ Hary
haha! thank you so much xD

@ Wisewit
okay xD

@ Ayu
awww..thanks! x)

@ Sankoo baba
thanks xD

@ Cheryl
yea..sure :)

@ Tristarfivestar
O.o
???

@ Nipun
haha! yea.. xD

@ Angel
thanks! I really missed you xD

nitwit said...

hey hpoe u will be beter soon little girl

Sjmach said...

Take care!!

Chocolate Lover said...

@ nitwit
yea.. :)

@ Sjmach
thanks :)

Jingle said...

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it is time for week 16 Thursday Poets Rally,
let me know if you wish to be a participant!
thank you.
you are represented a one of those fresh poet.