Sunday, June 26, 2011

"She was dying in her own dream-world.."

May be yes or may be no,
Sometimes high, sometimes low.
She giggled, she frowned,
She floated, she drowned,
in the river of mesmerising thoughts,
and millions of doubts.
Yes, she was scared to face the world all alone.
She couldn't help but just moan.
Pretty painful to see her dreams shatter,
For many it wasn't any matter,
She screamed, she cried,
Nothing was her pride,
They were all lost in pretty insane world,
While she was dying in her own dream-world.

19 comments:

Priya Chilamkurthi said...

loved these lines again.. changing the blog name made me to miss ur posts.. :(

Selenium said...

I guess it's the timing of this poem that got me. .__.

Good one.

Shriti said...

Pria,

Eh, I am sorry >.<
and thank you <3

Shriti said...

Sunakshi di,
Thank YOU :DD

Shriti said...

Ayu,
Eh, I am sorry :/ *hugs*

Shriti said...

Selenium,
Thank you o.o <3

M. Reka said...

A pleasure to read!

Short Poems

Gauri Mathur said...

I like your template girl!!! :)

Pavitra said...

Such beautiful words!
Loved the poem! :)

CATGIRL !! said...

aweee...such cute but sad thoughts :-(((


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The Emotional Lava
Best of Luck for ur blogging.

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Wow! ..Really really really loved this poem...<3
Thoroughly enjoyed reading it

Sorcerer said...

Long time..Long time..

As always..the lines of your poems are always fantastic

another beautiful work.

:)

Shriti said...

Marinela,
thank you <3 :)

Shriti said...

Gauri,
Thanks :D <3

Shriti said...

Ayu,
haha xP So I guess you know that I lie :3

Shriti said...

Pavitra,
Thank you =) <3

Shriti said...

Catgirl,
thank you. And yes, I would ^_^

Shriti said...

Valli,
Awh, thank you :3 <3

Shriti said...

Sorcerer,
Omg, where were you? xD
Eh, anyways.. good to see you back <3