Sunday, June 26, 2011

"She was dying in her own dream-world.."

May be yes or may be no,
Sometimes high, sometimes low.
She giggled, she frowned,
She floated, she drowned,
in the river of mesmerising thoughts,
and millions of doubts.
Yes, she was scared to face the world all alone.
She couldn't help but just moan.
Pretty painful to see her dreams shatter,
For many it wasn't any matter,
She screamed, she cried,
Nothing was her pride,
They were all lost in pretty insane world,
While she was dying in her own dream-world.

22 comments:

Pria Rao said...

loved these lines again.. changing the blog name made me to miss ur posts.. :(

Sunakshi said...

Excellent. :)

☆ ayu☆ said...

awww..sad..but i can relate somehow..

Selenium said...

I guess it's the timing of this poem that got me. .__.

Good one.

Chocolate Lover said...

Pria,

Eh, I am sorry >.<
and thank you <3

Chocolate Lover said...

Sunakshi di,
Thank YOU :DD

Chocolate Lover said...

Ayu,
Eh, I am sorry :/ *hugs*

Chocolate Lover said...

Selenium,
Thank you o.o <3

Marinela Reka said...

A pleasure to read!

Short Poems

Gauri Mathur said...

I like your template girl!!! :)

☆ ayu☆ said...

:) it's ok..i like your poems..somehow as if you can easily peek at someone's heart (even though you keep on telling us your works are pure fiction hehehe)

Pavitra .... said...

Such beautiful words!
Loved the poem! :)

CATGIRL !! said...

aweee...such cute but sad thoughts :-(((


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Valli said...

Wow! ..Really really really loved this poem...<3
Thoroughly enjoyed reading it

Sorcerer said...

Long time..Long time..

As always..the lines of your poems are always fantastic

another beautiful work.

:)

Chocolate Lover said...

Marinela,
thank you <3 :)

Chocolate Lover said...

Gauri,
Thanks :D <3

Chocolate Lover said...

Ayu,
haha xP So I guess you know that I lie :3

Chocolate Lover said...

Pavitra,
Thank you =) <3

Chocolate Lover said...

Catgirl,
thank you. And yes, I would ^_^

Chocolate Lover said...

Valli,
Awh, thank you :3 <3

Chocolate Lover said...

Sorcerer,
Omg, where were you? xD
Eh, anyways.. good to see you back <3