Thursday, June 9, 2011

"..your mem'ries.."

Wide awake at sleepy nights,
Your mem'ries left me with misty eyes,
 Love is me, love is you,
The distance between us is never few.

We are meant to be,
May be yes? I can see;
Shadows speak about lonliness,
But your mem'ries bring me solace.

When you smile,
My world stops there for a while.
Your mem'ries give me strength to survive,
Because of you I'm still alive. 

There's a lot of pain deep inside,
There are hundreds of secrets that I'd to hide,
You are not here, you are not near, I cannot reprise;
'cause all I have is your mem'ries.

P.S. umm to be honest, I really didn't like this one :/

This was supposed to be a mushy poem! :( But I wrote about me x_x


Sunakshi said...

I can lot of changes here and amazing is the word to describe the same.

Keep it up. :)

Chocolate Lover said...

Sunakshi di,
hehehe thank you <3 :)
and welcome back ^_^

Rose said...

Found your blog through a friend. Your writing is very poignant and touching. The poems I have read till now are very good.

Off to read more! Thanks for a lovely read. :)

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♠ Tharangni ♠ said...

it's really nice but! :)
ur tagged btw! :D

Selenium said...

It's not as bad as you think... even if it's just about you :)

... Madhumathi ... said...

Good poem nd rhyming baby.. :)

☆ ayu☆ said...

the photo is from elfen lied right?it matches the poem :)

Sankoobaba said...

"You are not here, you are not near, I cannot reprise;
'cause all I have is your mem'ries."

sad, yet beautiful ~~

Valli said...

Memories memories...Hmmm

Nicely rhymed with true feelings

Rohit Dassani said...

loved ur new design...or did i see it after a long time... anyways lovely post... keep it up!!

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

It's a lovely poem :)
It hurts when someone leaves..and the memories stay on in our hearts!

That's how life is :) We have to let go at a point!
Loved the poem :)
Keep writing!

Nikita Banerjee said...

Interesting and...a mushy poem does need a 'you' and 'me' :)

Chocolate Lover said...

Thanks for the visit :D
I am glad that you liked them ^_^ <3

Chocolate Lover said...

Thank you so much :D <3
I'll do the tag ^_^

Chocolate Lover said...

awww thank you ^_^ <3

Chocolate Lover said...

yeah XD

Chocolate Lover said...

Sankoo baba

Hehe~ thank you :)

Chocolate Lover said...

Thank youuuuuu :D

Chocolate Lover said...

Haha yeah I had changed it a few weeks back. :)