Wednesday, July 27, 2011

"..curse.."

Lost in the crowd,
Hear everything so clear and loud.

Now, you are invisible,
'cause words are strong and you're feeble.

Walking aimlessly to somewhere,
Misty eyes couldn't help but stare.

Everything is wrong, nothing is fair,
Miss all the times when you were together.

Darkness seems more interesting than their light,
They won and you lost the fight.

Reached the point again from where it started,
Embracing loneliness, embracing hatred. 

Screaming, crying and ending up worse,
You know it's nothing but a curse.

Knowing that you're falling into nothing.
 Cannot fly 'cause you don't have those wings.

19 comments:

Pramoda Meduri said...

Cheer up gal..:)

Be happy..

Komal Ali said...

So depressing, but love how you've articulated motions.

kelvin s.m. said...

..yeah, i must agree with Ayu.. cheer up friend.. smile!(:

~Kelvin

Nirati said...

U write beautifully!
I mean this is not the right word but WOW!
Take loads of care. And I sincerely hope things get better for you soon :)
*hugs*

S. said...

Photu is too sexy :P hahaha

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Nicely written and..apt pic :)

sanket kambli said...

good lines...

"Darkness seems more interesting than their light"

Shriti said...

Prams di,
I am :)

Shriti said...

Ayu,
Yup >.< ♥

Shriti said...

Komal,
Aww, Thank you ^_^ ♥

Shriti said...

Kelvin,
^_^ Thanks Kelvin :D ♥

Shriti said...

BlahBlaholic,
Aww Thank you so much ^_^
And thanks for following :D ♥

Shriti said...

Sunakshi di,
Lmao xD
And the poem? :P

Shriti said...

Valli,
Thank you :D ♥

Shriti said...

Sankoobaba,
Thank you ^_^ ♥

S. said...

Wo bhi acchi hain but less than photu :P lol

Shriti said...

Lol, you are awesome :P

JustPony said...

Love this! <3

JustPony said...

Love this! <3