Wednesday, July 27, 2011

"..curse.."

Lost in the crowd,
Hear everything so clear and loud.

Now, you are invisible,
'cause words are strong and you're feeble.

Walking aimlessly to somewhere,
Misty eyes couldn't help but stare.

Everything is wrong, nothing is fair,
Miss all the times when you were together.

Darkness seems more interesting than their light,
They won and you lost the fight.

Reached the point again from where it started,
Embracing loneliness, embracing hatred. 

Screaming, crying and ending up worse,
You know it's nothing but a curse.

Knowing that you're falling into nothing.
 Cannot fly 'cause you don't have those wings.

20 comments:

Being Pramoda... said...

Cheer up gal..:)

Be happy..

☆ ayu☆ said...

the feeling of being cursed is so scary, ne? >.<

Komal Ali said...

So depressing, but love how you've articulated motions.

WINDOWLAD said...

..yeah, i must agree with Ayu.. cheer up friend.. smile!(:

~Kelvin

BlahBlaholic ♥ said...

U write beautifully!
I mean this is not the right word but WOW!
Take loads of care. And I sincerely hope things get better for you soon :)
*hugs*

Sunakshi said...

Photu is too sexy :P hahaha

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Nicely written and..apt pic :)

Sankoobaba said...

good lines...

"Darkness seems more interesting than their light"

Chocolate Lover said...

Prams di,
I am :)

Chocolate Lover said...

Ayu,
Yup >.< ♥

Chocolate Lover said...

Komal,
Aww, Thank you ^_^ ♥

Chocolate Lover said...

Kelvin,
^_^ Thanks Kelvin :D ♥

Chocolate Lover said...

BlahBlaholic,
Aww Thank you so much ^_^
And thanks for following :D ♥

Chocolate Lover said...

Sunakshi di,
Lmao xD
And the poem? :P

Chocolate Lover said...

Valli,
Thank you :D ♥

Chocolate Lover said...

Sankoobaba,
Thank you ^_^ ♥

Sunakshi said...

Wo bhi acchi hain but less than photu :P lol

Chocolate Lover said...

Lol, you are awesome :P

JustPony said...

Love this! <3

JustPony said...

Love this! <3