Friday, December 10, 2010

"..If only they.."

If only I could escape this place,
I'd go anywhere 
to live my life in my own way
with no boundations .

I can not fly,
but soon I will die,
What if they didn't let me go,
I'd end my life?
I hate being cocooned in their love,

Frustrating and suffocating is their care,
And I know He is being unfair.
And now no hopes but only dreams
are spared in my life ..


Anonymous said...

awww gal cheer up!! Life is goo, just wait for time to turn :) and dreams are in words hope dear, so never say you stop either of them because that means end of life and you are still young ! :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

well..probably..the narrator in the poem just wanted some space..well, she's fortunate to have persons who love her so much that she is actually suffocating by their way of showing their care..she should be thankful instead rather than grieve..others dont experience that..

♫♪♥Lonely Dreamer♥♪♫ said...

Dream with the intension of making them come true.
If it's suffocating, wake up and break free :)
There's a long time for death. You have enough time to start and live the way you want once again :)
Make up your mind, break the bonds that are eating you up alive! =) Things will be fine!
And yes, I'm perfectly fine ;D Hope you're okay!

Anonymous said...

Thank you ^_<