Wednesday, October 12, 2011

"..She doesn't cry.."

She forgot to rhyme,
And learned to smile,
She doesn't cry nor does she die. 
The words denied to dance on her tune,
'cause she has found something brighter than the moon. 


Pria said...

That's interesting! Waiting for the smiling posts :)

wisewit said...



Tharangni said...

waow! missed your so mystical writings and ftw this was awesome! :D

Leo said...

Forgot to rhyme? Don't think so :P Absolutely not! :)

Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

That's cool...That's cool..I don't mind if words leave you....or you forget to rhyme....I just want you to be happy always :)

Kalyan said...

lovely words...nicely crafted lines!


..'something brighter than the moon' - i was caught by that line Shriti... i'm just not sure if it's a good sign or a negative one... but i like the whole thing of it.. (:

Take care!


Sankoobaba said...

short and sweet

Reicha Ahluwalia said...

Wow ! you write so beautifully :)
When i was at your age i was unaware of the term "blog" :P

Liked your thoughts !
Keep penning.
Take care