Smiles the infinite blue,
Whispers the pink mist,
Stares the dead dryness,
Lonliness scaterred everywhere..
Its just me and my thoughts,
A shattered soul and an
impregnible heart..
The beauty is in soul,
and in your heart..
I have never loved you,
I have always loved ,
the almighty who lies ,
within you..
I am broken and dejected,
but the stars still twinkle at me,
And the shooting stars,
still grants me wish..
I stand alone with lonliness;
and secrets in my heart
are no more apart
from your heart..
still grants me wish..
I stand alone with lonliness;
and secrets in my heart
are no more apart
from your heart..
P.S. sorry I am not updating my blog and not even checking yours blog! :( eeeehh it's writer's block I guess! X(
I want to spend more time with Mark, Alan, Xin Yi and Poxy.. they are my friends for life.. My school's gonna start -.-" from 16 june.. wont come online for 10 months then.. I may shedule some posts! I dont know! >.<
9 comments:
Oh, you'll be surely missed... mine will start at 15... though sad news you had in here i must say it's all ok.. the poem carried me away... liked it a lot...cheers!:)
Take care and the best of luck!:D
>Kelvin
yeah we will miss you
nicely pennd down.. will surely miss you, and all the best to you and to your frnds too..:)
Yeah, we're going to miss you!
wisewit
i liked the pic n rhyme too :)
we will miss you dear..
love your poem,
Happy Friday!
The starting paragraph is simply awesome. Though I thought there were some conflicting thoughts at the end. A nice attempt, I can say. :-)
@ Kelvin
awwwwwww thanks kelvin T____T
@ Sankoo baba
i'll miss you too T_____T
@ Prams di
thanks di! :)
will miss you too T____T
@ Wisewit
hehe! I'll miss you all too :)
@ Ayu
me too ayu X(
@ Riya
thanks :))
I'll miss you too T_____T
@ Jingle
thanks jingle :))
@ Vittaldas
haha! i blend of random thoughts XD
even i am confused.. o.o
I dont know what I wrote!! o.o
This is poetry. I really like this over the others I've read. Strive, reach, and you will soar!
(Good luck with your schooling)
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