Wednesday, October 12, 2011

"..She doesn't cry.."

She forgot to rhyme,
And learned to smile,
She doesn't cry nor does she die. 
The words denied to dance on her tune,
'cause she has found something brighter than the moon. 

9 comments:

Priya Chilamkurthi said...

That's interesting! Waiting for the smiling posts :)

wisewit said...

Nice!

wisewit

tharangni said...

waow! missed your so mystical writings and ftw this was awesome! :D

Vinay Leo R. said...

Forgot to rhyme? Don't think so :P Absolutely not! :)

Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

That's cool...That's cool..I don't mind if words leave you....or you forget to rhyme....I just want you to be happy always :)

Kalyan Panja said...

lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

kelvin s.m. said...

..'something brighter than the moon' - i was caught by that line Shriti... i'm just not sure if it's a good sign or a negative one... but i like the whole thing of it.. (:

Take care!

~Kelvin

sanket kambli said...

short and sweet

FirstTimeMother said...

Wow ! you write so beautifully :)
When i was at your age i was unaware of the term "blog" :P

Liked your thoughts !
Keep penning.
Take care