Tears and scars are my fate,
I find no reason for crying
but today, my tears aren't mine.
I wish if I could stop;
My absence never bothered anyone
and it won't till the end.
I'll melt in twilight,
I'll walk in misty night
and then I'll disappear in darkness.
Leaving behind some enchanting
memories and misty eyes,
and a bit pain in your heart.
20 comments:
hey.. i think you hav had some bad experiences in life.. are you sad most of the time?? if not, then y do u keep writing sad posts???? :(
c'mon..cheer up... 4get abt ur worries... n keep smiling...
n take a break..keep some 'happy' post titles.. no more tears, scars, betray n all that... okkkkk... :)
keep smiling... :) n the poem is nice.. :D
...o, this poem is full of melancholy... consistent emotions from the starting phrase to the last line... i just hope the emotions are only intended to make this poem and not to you personally, feelin' this way.... cheers!!!:D
TC.
>Kelvin
what makes u this upset at this young age...tell me?
Wow...really touched my heart...
very well written... :)
hey..back after a long time in your blog
Nice to see that its active
as always..another pretty nice one from you.
good work..keep it up!
You're very good with sad poetry :)
It touches the heart..
Hmm...
Very Beautifully Written & Expressed Something That Really Speaks Me!
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Dat was really one of your best writing ..matured and crisp words .. I loved the 3rd line - "but today, my tears aren't mine." .. Loved the entire poem a lot .. depths of pain are , in best way , framed in simplest words ! :)
so well done,
I feel your emotions...
im touched
@ Anoop
yeah kinda xD
hmm I can't do that.. I really think too much.. and I like writing sad poems 'cause they are mostly my feelings :3
@ Kelvin
hehe.. I am fine kelvin ^-^
thanks for caring *hugs* :))
@ Madhu
u wont believe.. buttt a lot of stuffs :]
*hugs*
@ Sumit
thank you sumit ^^
@ Sorcy
wb sorcy.. hope to see u again and again and again :P
@ Koo
thank you ^^
@ Moon shine
thank you.. and yeah sure as soon as possible :3
@ adreamygal
awwww thank you so much.. ^_^
@ Jingle
:))
@ Sankoobaba
haha1 glad to know :)
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