I saw her peeping in;
She had few scars on her faces,
and red puffy eyes.
as if she hasn't slept since,
many nights.
She was wearing pink
dress and a tired smile.
She was scared and shattered.
She was someone's betrayed beloved.
May be she was lost in
her mesmerizing thoughts.
I was staring at her and
I don't know when
A tear rolled down my cheek.
There was something peculiar
in her which was bothering
me deep inside my heart.
I tend to go closer to her
but as I reached near,
She started running towards
the immense crowd.
I ran after her, I wanted to
know what had happened.
I wanted to help her but
she ran as if she didn't want.
I kept searching for
her in the crowd but
She had disappeared forever.
15 comments:
Beautifully written.
Enjoyed reading it. :) :D
~ Ajay Kontham
Nice. I love the way you write it.
You Can Easily Say In The Form Of Words..Very Telented !
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i love the intensity of the situation depicted.. =)
Attracted to sad looking girls???
O_o
But the description of the sad girl was good... if such a girl appeared in reality, I'd definitely put a chase. Dunno about the tears rolling down cheek part... :-|
Beautiful!!!! And so sad.... hope she does return. Sometimes what seems the 'end' is actually just a 'bend' (in the river). Stole that from something read somewhere a long time back :-)
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Thanks!
hayii..li'l girl .. its beautiful ...
loved reading your words. !
@ Ajay
thanks ^^
@ Minnie runner
thank you ^_^
@ Moonshine
hehe.. thank you ^^
and yeah sure :3
@ Bea
thanks ^^
@ Selenium
lol xD loved ur comment hahaha xD
@ writerzblock
yup yup :3
@ Viddhi
hehe thanks viddhi :3
...mysterious girl... what had happened to her??? i'm curious???(T_T)
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