With his eyes locked on mine,
May be it was the only sign.
For the first time I felt togetherness,
in despair and lonliness.
I didn't see the world around me,
My teary eyes smiled with glee.
My soul yelled "I don't wanna leave you,
My breath now left are very few."
He leaned in closer,
I was scared, his touch made me shiver;
He held my hand tight,
I looked away 'cause it wasn't right.
His eyes were locked on my neck
and he could easily see the wreck.
Tried a lot to hide those scars,
a delightful curse by the Mars.
He clinched his teeth and,
his hand,
turned into fist,
I found myself in mist..
He didn't utter a word,
his eyes full of rage looked like a sword,
I stood up and my teary eyes,
whispered descent lies.
I could easily listen to his heart
saying "we aren't yet apart."
I could feel the wrath of his soul,
yelling, "how could he do this for his goal?"
And his rage disappeared,
as I held on to his fist and sneered;
He looked down and sighed,
My hands tensed and he smiled.
He kissed my scars,
and a thousand million stars;
illuminated the sky for that
one moment which had no threat.
I came close and hugged him tight,
It was a dreadful night.
I turned back and whispered good bye;
I cried till my tears get dry.
He ran after me and seized my hand,
Misty eyes said "sorry", I gave him, his friendship band;
and disappeared in the woods away;
from his life across the bay...
21 comments:
hey,
" wonderful words to the least,
emotions always on the high.
you amaze me,
with each letter of your speech. "
^-^ . I don't think that sounds like a poem.
as always your work was amazing.
wow!!
Choco is growing day by day as an author..:)
'Cries until my tears went dry'
This was really wonderful and heart touching..
God going sweety..
Cheers
Nuts
wow.that's really good.
its as if Im reading a story..
What happened here??? O_o
I mean, did someone die or did someone run away because they couldn't be together??
I put my money on the latter, but I must say... 'twas "Intense" :)
wow..u actually wrote this..OMG
@ Anurag
hehe thank you ^^
@ Nipun
hehe yeah i guess :3
thank you ^_^
@ Yam
hehe.. yeah.. i penned it like that xD
@ Selenium
she is going to die soon so she ran away :3
@ Madhu
yeah XD
and thanks ^-^
teach me some poetry too .. how u do that ??? u r just so great ...i love the lucidity and flow of your worthless shit ( love :( ) ..srry abt that :P :P
The stanza is very nice and lovable..
I love the stanza where he kissed the scars :)
Great!
....oh, a poem at its best... magnifico Shriti!!!! i am hoping to see more and more of this...
...d(*,*)b...
Beautiful....touched my soul deeply...
keep writing... :)
Amazing !!!!!!
I loved it totally!
I can see some reality and love in this verse!
Amazing.
That was really well written.
Really nice poem. It accurately captures the feeling of love and the fear of separation :)
great poem if you need help chearing up i know a few good feel beeter songs
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