kiss away her tears;
and She kissed the sky,
to blow away her fears..
The cresent moon is,
shining down on her face.
The saddest sight is,
pleasing in different ways;
Death sucked all the,
pains and torments that,
She has been bearing for ages;
Finally she can find
solace..
Death sucked all the,
pains and torments that,
She has been bearing for ages;
Finally she can find
solace..
The breeze sang a song,
to make her fall asleep;
to make her fall asleep;
The last long sleep one can,
ever have and yes,
She will never wake up again;
Even love cried when she died,
Fireflies illuminated the view;
dew drops are so sad,
dried leaves made her death bed..
ever have and yes,
She will never wake up again;
Even love cried when she died,
Fireflies illuminated the view;
dew drops are so sad,
dried leaves made her death bed..
11 comments:
Its beautiful..keep it up girl..
even love cried when she died... quite sad.
aw. beautiful.
i wonder where your thoughts are coming from...cause you always amaze me with your poems.
Thats so sad ! :( But you beautiful portray makes us more emphatetic .. Indeed very sad sight , which we never wish to see :(
Lovely one :)
You love Owl City, right? ;p
How have you been?
...sad and gloomy yet very lovely and enchanting my friend... i fully understand your case 'bout bein' busy of school stuffs... co'z we're just the same.. i'm aswell busy finishing our Feasibility study... so for both of us... Good luck and cheers!!!:)
>kelvin
Beautiful..
Amazing..
Cheers
Nuts
U knw wht i read 2 poems on fireflies dis morning!!!! :)
i guess all r obsessed wid owlcity!!! lol
http://jinjusoulspeak.blogspot.com/2010/06/fireflies-at-night.html
n haan dudo about me page has been updated :)
You made death appear so soothing and peaceful.
this is a well-written poem and very touching. but i do hope you are doing better dear! :)
http://cherylclarke.blogspot.com
:O
I have only three words to say about this...
That was awesome...
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