Sunday, July 4, 2010

a voice whispered..

Randomness follows your heart,
Cries in loneliness;
and the secret
lies in eyes..
Whimpering soul dies in despair,
You know you can
never escape
nightmares..
You will face this all alone but;
A song I may sing to
make the darkness
 sleep..
Come to me and I will tell you
'bout the secrets of 
the shooting stars
and pale moon..
Eyes stares at the dawn and
may be looks for a
Campanion but
finds no one..
Shattered soul have to walk all alone
Dreams aren't enough
to overcome
fears..

17 comments:

PhilO♥ said...

A very uplifting post :)
Loved it. How have you been?

lost wanderer said...

really nice blog :) nice post with sort of powerful words :) <3

Leona said...

Hm, you misspelled "loneliness" over there. Just thought I'd point it out. :)

Another bittersweet post.
Keep on writing; take care~

Sincerely,
Leona

tharangni said...

woahow! so beautifull! :) and so serene!

sjmach said...

You write so well, makes me jealous :). You can actually publish your poems as a book....

Americanising Desi said...

dreams arent enough?

yes probably not all the time!

good write!

YAM said...

that's a good one:)

Oh to Be a Muse said...

beautiful. and by the way, you're not mean! :)

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Jingle said...

very powerful message.
Happy Sunday!

wisewit said...

Dreams aren't enough? Probably true, but I thought that bit about the shooting stars was fascinating.

wisewit

el_idioto said...

everyone finds someone with time... :D

trust me on that

Pavitra said...

Great post...Very strong words...I love it!

Karan Agrawal said...

Nice poem again! I would love to read poems on various, multiple topics reflecting all forms of emotions, adventure, masti, etc!

Samadrita said...

Sad poem but I liked the last lines.'Dreams are not enough to overcome fears....' Never thought about it. But now I realize it's very trye :)

Unknown said...

Lovely again choco..:)
I have become a big fan of ur writing..:)
Teach me something girl..

Hugs
<>

Cheers

Nuts

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