Stop hiding you pains,
I know it's a fake smile ,
right there on your face..
Trust me I care,
Trust me and just share,
What I all need is
A shining crescent moon on your face..
Your eyes just can't lie,
Your words just betray you,
C'mmon I know you better than
anyone else in the world..
You gotta tell me ,
Whats wrong?
It's there in your heart,
so what if we are apart?
C'mmon just hold my hand,
and hug me tight,
Don't be scared ,
'Cause I know it's right!
I love to see that smile,
I love to see you giggle all night,
You are the most wonderful dream,
let your pains out and just scream...
Walk away if you want,
I love to see you giggle all night,
You are the most wonderful dream,
let your pains out and just scream...
Walk away if you want,
But don't forget I am still standing there,
'Cause I know you are gonna come back,
don't be scared those feelings are nothing but taunts!!
15 comments:
lovely poem!
"*Walk away if you wantBut don't forget I am still standing *"
perfect!!!
Awwwww... that's once again a beautiful poem, keep it up. :))))))
I posted your poem in my blog too,
please visit...
http://www.jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com
Happy Sunday!
Great blog you have here :) Check mine out: http://youdidwhaaat.blogspot.com/
:)
Being there for the person you loved, even if it means that the person is never going to love you back. Excellent work with the words to convey the meaning.
lovely lines........
specially...
"Walk away if you want,But don't forget I am still standing there,'Cause I know you are gonna come back,don't be scared those feelings are nothing but taunts!!"
wowwwwwwwwww simply awesome sri... lovely poem buddy
hey gr8 poem on the list again :)
A most pleasurable read... loved it...rock on!!!:D
Blessings!!!!:D
P.S. hmmmn, i've notice a blogger having the same name as yours... Chocolate lover... is it you too???
>kelvin
@ Jingle
thanx XD
@ Sankoobaba
haha! thank you ^-^
@ Chocolatelover
hehe! thanks ^-^
@ Jingle
awwwwwww... thanks jingle ^-^
@ You did what?
hehe! thanks you know you hv a gr8 blog too ^-^
@ Vittaldas
hehe! thank you ^-^
@ Jay
haha! thanks! ^-^
glad you liked it!
@ nitwit
awww.. thank you ^-^
@ dudo
thanks dudo! x))
@ Kelvin
haha! thanks buddy!!
nope its not me.. we hv another chocolatelover on blogosphere! everyone is getting confused :P
so i am gonna write my name differently now haha! ^-^
Miss chocolate lover...u seem to get better with each passing day!
Hi CHaco gal.. absolutelyy lovelyyyyy..:) thanks fr the lines..;)
o... ok... now i know... tnx!!!:D
@ Madhu
hehe! thanx xD
@ Prams di
hehe thanks! ^____^
@ Kelvin
haha! xD
Post a Comment