My eyes sinking in tears,
The feeling of coziness and no fears,
Yes I do cry but
Really I don't know why?
Your smile is bliss.
Your care is love.
that luminous expression
and warm admiration..
from that shooting star,
I just wish..
to fall in illusion where,
it's just you and me
forever..
Embracing me in you,
Why's this feeling so deep and new?
My woes are healed..
when you are with me
Listen to those faint echoes,
the delicacy of my heart,
and decent lies in my eyes
accept you no one knows..
Hiding all your fears and tears,
You are always there by my side..
I can't make you smile,
I can't share your pains,
How to tell you that
How much I love and how much I care..
47 comments:
Beautifully written! Loved this poem..
Its a gr8 flow of words there specially when you as a rhetorical question "Embracing me in you,
Why's this feeling so deep and new?"
Really Chocolaty!!!!
sad and romantic at the same time... beautifully written :)
Time shall tell! :)
Do wait and do express :)
...your poems really do play on the strings if emotions.. really powerful too...
"I can't make you smile,I can't share your pains"
sweet!!
how do you do it?
@ Vidya
thanks x))
@ Dudo
thanks! xD
@ Chhaya
thanx!
I'm glad xD
@ Pankhuri
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@ Ayu
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lovely poem by a lovely girllllll . you are complaete wordsmoth kido
Again a beautiful creation!
In btwn, I have sent a request on FB!
you write beautifully
hey i had sent request to a shri check out whather its you or not and my name is garima bajpai
Niceeeeeeeee hain Choco...
Mush suits you more than sorrow:-)
:):)
romantic choco...i loved reading it :)
Sadly beautiful !!! I can tbeliev u r jus 16 , coz the emotons have put out so wonderfully !! Its really good :)
Amazed..
Beautiful choco...
Really lovely work..
Cheers
Nuts
So much yearning in those silent prayers. A very tender poem. I like it.
AWWWWWWWWWWW
nice nice...
its sad and at the same time...vibrant with the emotions.
beautiful.
Hey!!
How have you been? Sorry I was away for so many days and so I couldn't get on your space!
Beautiful poem, as usual :)
Take Care!!
beautifully written!
a lovely poem, well delivered emotions with a nice use of words.well done
wonderfully written piece...great flow and intense emotion...
Very young love"ish"
Like the beginning of spring
Lovely
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nice.. njoyed it
:)
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a beautiful love poem.. i love it! :D you can really feel the emotions :)
Very romantic indeed.
Why the sadness, dear?
Happy Thursday!
Mine is here
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shakira
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hi juhi! I'm good and u?
thanks! I'm glad that you liked it :D
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thanks! I'm so happy!
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@ Shakira
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I write sad ones mostly :P
you would more sad poems here :D
keep visiting ;)
Happy Thursday,
have fun visiting your visitors back!
This is awesome...forbidden love...reading it over 3 times can't even do, I simply love it.
Check this out:
http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/2010/04/gratitude-amidst-agony.html
A very sweet poem...touched my heart..Keep going
Regards
Niraj
Masallalemonade.blogspot.com
Aw.. This poem is adorable! :)
Absolutely wonderful blog you have here! Beautiful imagery, background and especially beautiful words. I find myself wanting to say, "well writen for a young girl". But I remember all too well those words being said to me and I HATED IT! Because age does not determine how well one should do ANYTHING! Keep it up. I am excited to read more.
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beautiful, wonderful poetry..well done
This poem is full of emotion and well written. Thanks
You capture the aspect of love when you care for someone deeply but it is just not enough to heal them perfectly!
Hey Choco
Finally i created an award page. and u hav been tagged there.
Here is an award 4 u to grab on!!!!
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nice job on this one
nice job on this one
beautifull it is .. n ur just 16 now ...that is amazingly good for a 16 yr old ....
What a sweet emotional poem. Thanks for visiting my blog.
sooo cute n beautifully expressed!!1 feels great to be back to ya blog afta ages!!!:))
was away frm bloggin for a looong tym!!
glad to reconnect with you!:)
simply gorgeous.
wonderfull and full of love.
Thanks for sharing this with potluck poetry.
well done!
AWw..this was so lovely!! Love sure is bliss!
Beautifully expressed here, my friend..
Thanks for sharing this sweet and tender poem with poetry potluck! It really was a pleasure reading it!
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